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幫忙翻譯包裝方面的【已解决】

xx po的包裝: 每個產品放一張白紙(即隔離紙)後再入一只網袋.
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yDM0Y)kYp;f%X 二,工廠怕時間久了,料會染上網布的顏色,故在產品外包一張白紙用於隔離網袋,請問是否需要放白紙?
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xxpo is packed as follow: each produce is wrapped in tissue paper before being packed in its individual mesh.
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would we need the tissue paper?
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[[i] 本帖最后由 凯丽帽帽 于 2008-5-7 08:48 AM 编辑 [/i]]

白纸用TISSUE PAPER是很准确的说法y3?&^uAm
TISSUE PAPER又称拷贝纸，是一种很薄的用于衬垫的纸，广泛用于内包装
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dz-{`C3p Recycled Tissue Paper is perfect for bread wrap, crockery, glassware, filling and handbags
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X%k?\*I)_"Z't4dP [[i] 本帖最后由 Kevin_von 于 2008-5-6 10:56 PM 编辑 [/i]]

there are two reasons according to factory 。 L(\-]hr?7t,|.COh!b
这里的ACCORDING TO用得不太地道，还不如直接写GIVEN BY THE FACTORY或者就是FROM THE FACTORYG,_5b&pKXKF
如果你是作为工厂的外贸部门的，这里应该写WORKSHOP后者MANUFACTURE DEPT.
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t.rB:xk ?:mS 今天要忙别的事情。等一下哦T1[%Bb8~m*my-`
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[[i] 本帖最后由 Kevin_von 于 2008-5-6 08:54 PM 编辑 [/i]]

我不怎么懂语法，来帮顶。。HOHO

又学到了,谢谢!

关于PRODUCE的用法

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[size=4][color=blue]1. produce作名词时，是不可数名词，尤指农产品。例如：garden produce-园艺产品；native produce-土特产。[/color][/size]
+E`.w$Y@ @4n9J [size=4][color=blue]2. production可指生产、作品、成果等。例如：/{-n_9OU
A movie is going into production. 电影开拍了。[/color][/size]H8?9yZIf:\1ki
[size=4][color=blue]3. product用作“产品”时，尤指社会的、历史的、工业的产品。例如："Bq1g@F*i$nB{OH
Is history the product of impersonal social and economic forces? 历史是非个人社会和经济力量造就的吗？[/color][/size]
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[color=blue]agricultural products and especially fresh fruits and vegetables as distinguished from grain and other staple crops[/color]"u4?*L9]'`oW*\ V
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[color=blue]food that is grown or raised through farming,esp. fruits and vegetables.[/color]
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{R6GNM/^El'w 综合起来说, produce 是倾向于表示农产品类。而PRODUCTS一般指工业品，一般的工厂生产产品。

老冯说的太好了。
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TISSUE PAPER一定要记住

现在来说说xxpo is packed as follow

楼主这里是不是想表达 “某PO”的意思？
*`y!l){#Z0a 严格的说 某PO is packed 肯定不对的了——但我们实际工作中也经常这样用，比如什么produce the PO, 老外不会去追究这个动词和宾语的搭配不准确的( the production of PO No. xxx will be effected / arranged/ started)9my*Jm0H

-X%qe`E 另外as follow在正式的英语中是不准确的说法, 而应该是as follows:NT+FS4m+Sh&~
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按词典的解释是As will be stated next. Used to introduce a specified enumeration, explanation, or command.
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[用法注意：  as follows(而不是as follow)的用法是建立在惯例，习语基础上的，与所提及的对象名词 是单数还是复数无关， 比如the regulation are as follows]
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physics (pronunciation) n. (used with a singular verb)
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/o2Z.bY3FO O 当然，实际使用时其实也都乱了。
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[[i] 本帖最后由 Kevin_von 于 2008-5-6 10:48 PM 编辑 [/i]]

產品本身的料很軟,直接裝入網袋裝箱後經過擠壓,料會有明顯網眼壓痕
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关于压痕，查了半天似乎impress更为准确一些。
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|?J&rC Because of the soft material , thee will be impress on the surface caused by the mesh if the unit is packed directly in the mesh without any protection of inner wrap.Fh*[D/F+Hdi
因为材料柔软，如不加内包装，直接装入网袋中，表面将会由于网袋的挤压产生压痕。
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[.tO3a W,`$YO8T 因为impress本身就带有受挤压的意思，所以不翻译那个挤压的动作也是可以的。

:tb1 :tb1 謝謝檬檬哦,糾正偶那麼多滴錯誤

回复 10# 的帖子--昏厥。这个就是“已解决”？

明明还有一部分内容没有讨论到呢。。。。

这位版主太强了

好:tb37 ,又學到東西了
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