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Hope that we can cooperate with your esteemed co.
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1. vitamin A / B / D / E / H USP24
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It is glad to write to you with keen hope to open a business relation ship with you. Your company name and email address have been introduced by e-Marketplace.
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KCT Co., Ltd. is one of the best professional company to develop and manufacture functional and new materials. KCT Co., Led. is manufacturing hardwood charcoal polymer that can be applied to our daily goods with its antimicrobial effect, deodorization and infrared ray (Examples: Hardwood charcoal polymer receptacle, chopping board, food waste collecting container and bedclothes).V r_m,wqz)y7Y:s
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I think #1 is better, list your products, it's clear.

Hope to hear good news from you.

thank  you   very   much!!!:tb37 :tb37

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我的MSN 是[email]shihuawei2007@msn.com[/email]希望和你交流:tb12 :tb12 :tb12 :tb12

Thank you very much

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这样的email写什么标题比较好呢？:tb22

One word—very good!:tb37

个人认为写上根客户经营的相关的产品名称比较好，至少客户有兴趣去看内容。

AHA ,It's just which I need ,tks. :tb88 7i;^2QB-CJ}2S
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I think it's very important to choose one notly title . Could you please give some idears for us？ Icewater.    :tb12

both of them are good,different styles~~

我老觉的内容太多了

tks

thanks your kindness!it is very senseful for me!

very well~~~

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thank you

The first one is very conciseness and clarity.l:y(K}K
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I think the sencond is a little wordiness .
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it   could  be  better

ONE WORLD ,ONE DREAM ..

:tb37 顶！

会不会觉得太笼长了啊。我觉得客人要耐着性子看那么多的内容，因该不会引起他们多大的兴趣吧。我觉得重点突出了就可以，比如产品的质量啊，价格方面啊，还有服务方面啊。说实话，我起初是按照楼主给的版式老老实实的写给客人的，但是还是不见客人有回信。所以啊伤心啊，心碎啊

唉呀.............晕..................这么好的东东再学一遍.......

I suggest the best way is to attach several  product pictures,and shorten you company profile,yes,the customer hasn't enough time to  read so long words,he will show interests  and contact u as soon as he sees the pictures he need look for......

:tb52 thanks  a  lot!