我们公司很久没有任何改进了，都不知道要写什么新鲜的了。羡慕楼主哦[em07]

非常棒！！
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这里是我们美国公司收到的一份邀请函. 除公司和摊位去掉外没有任何改变. 大家一起来评议,修改,发挥,共同提高吧:
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Glad to learn that you will attend the 97th Canton Fair and are 5 e: X3 C, v7 U. ]
interested in various home textile items.
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part in the fair from Apr. 15 to 20th and our booth is NO. nn.n Xnn. We
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worth your time.
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" S2 H* Z* Y8 W6 eLooking forward you visit with best regards
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以下是引用SUPERHOT在2005-4-7 11:09:00的发言：
# E3 i% R" g9 y非常棒！！ 什么时候开个商务学习班！我第一个参加！/ S6 M2 T% \/ R0 O& l
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支持！！支持！！！！！！！！！！！[em02][em02][em02]) n0 ?- B7 q4 s4 ^* u$ p

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这里是刚收到的另外一份:DEAR FRIEND,SPRING CANTON FAIR IS COMING,WE WOULD YOU LIKE TO VISIT OUR BOOTH TO SEE MORE INTERESTING ITEMS OF STONE PRODUCTS,AND PLEASE ADVISE THE TIME YOU WILL VISIT OUR BOOTH,THANK YOU! PLACE :CHINESE EXPORT COMMODITIES PAZHOU COMPLEX       (XINGANG DONG ROAD,HAI ZHU ,GUANGZHOU, CHINA)OUR BOOTH NO.NN.N.BNNHALL: F1MOBILE:+86-13NN-NNNN-NNN --------------------------请大家评注好的地方和不足的地方.

我最大的问题就是写不出一手好的商业信函.郁闷啊,英文底子太差了.

刚好能用上！！！谢谢；啊

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