Dear Yiotis Demetriou
     You had visited my booth (precioustone lighting) on October 27-30 2004 lighting fair HK, and inquired about my lamps. My colleague Miss Jiang had given you a company catalog at that time. But there were some new lamps, which didn’t included in the catalog, which you are very interested in.look the attached photo.
     I had seen your company web on the internet.I think that our products are suitable for you.We are a professional lighting product manufacture with 11 years experience in China, offering downlight,recessedlight,tracklight and aluminums reflector. Our product had exported to EU US and Mid-EAST, We are the best manufacture that you can trust in China.
     those lamps are new in our factory. if you like I will send more information to you
about specification and price.
     I am looking forward to receiving your early reply!
best regard
这是我发给潜在客户的E-MAIL但客户就是没有回复
想请教以下各位前辈,帮我看看有什么不行的地方,多多指点.
　　　　　
　　　　　　　　                                                                                     　　　　　　　　                                
                                                

Dear Yiotis Demetriou;I am glad to know you  at  lighting fair (Oct, 27 , 2004 -Oct, 30 ,2004) in HK. i am xx, from xxxxx(your company name)our booth No. : xxxxxx. thank you for coming to our showroom. you give us a deep impression ,i think you can remember xxxxxx(your company name). you have our catalogue, yes? by the way, some new products do not showed the catalogue,  please concult the attachment and look at our news lamp.I had seen your company website .I think that our products are suitable for you.We are a professional lighting product manufacture with 11 years experience in China, offering downlight,recessedlight,tracklight and aluminums reflector. Our product had exported to EU US and Mid-EAST, We are one of best manufacturer , so you can trust us.
about these news lamps, let me know if you have future questions , do not hesitate to contact me .anytime to service you .      We look  forward to hearing  from you soon!
Best regard xxx 我给你稍微修改了一下, 仅供参考!

应该是Best regards

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谢谢楼主，受益了